Contract Review: Pace Communications

Here is a recent Pace contract that a writer sent. Please remember that a) I'm not a lawyer, b) this isn't legal advice, and c) my remarks don't necessarily mean that the publisher will or will not negotiate (it's always good to try the latter):

• Clause one This gives the tentative article name and an approximate word count. Unfortunately, there are no limitations on the amount by which the count can go up, but the payment (clause 10) may be a fixed amount.


• Clause two This is the clause where you state that you aren't going to infringe anyone's copyright. However, there is a built-in indemnification "from all damages, costs and expenses which PACE may incur by reason of any copyright infringement or claim of copyright infringement." That "claim of copyright infringement" is a problem, because what if you were not guilty of it? Ask to alter the wording so that it is only for final judgments of copyright infringement in a court of competent jurisdiction after all appeals have been exhausted.


• Clause 3 This is a fairly reasonable warranty that, to the best of your knowledge, the article has nothing in it that, if published, "will be libelous, defamatory or scandalous or violate any personal or property rights of any third party." You agree to cooperate in joint defense, though, frankly, I'm not sure whether that might open you to having to bear some part of the legal costs. It's also not just for any libel or defamation, but the claim of libel or defamation.


• Clause 4 Here's where you get the delivery date and you agree that you'll keep a copy of the article around at least until the publication date. (What, someone would not keep a copy?)


• Clause 5 You have to provide phone numbers, releases, references, and so on for fact checking. Does that mean you have to send over hard copies? I don't know, but would suspect that, yes, you would. Do you have to provide your notes? I'm not sure it would be covered, and I certainly wouldn't volunteer such material, since fact checking should be independent verification that what you claim is true actually is according to someone else, which means specifically going to sources that aren't looking at your notes.


• Clause 6 If you don't deliver the article on time, they can cancel the contract, and there is no provision made for someone having extended the deadline. If they don't like the article, they can request one rewrite. They start payment when they "verbally accept" the article. I'd follow up with an email to establish a trail of that acceptance, as otherwise there is no way to prove the telephone conversation happened. There is no time line for them having to provide acceptance or rejection within a given guideline, and they should only be able to reject an article if it does not cover the agreed-upon topic or does so in a way that is not professional. As for a kill fee provision: "Prior to acceptance, should a rewritten Magazine Article not be satisfactory to PACE, or if PACE elects for any reason not to publish the Magazine Article, it will pay WRITER a kill fee of U.S $XXX in full and final settlement of PACE's obligations hereunder." In other words, even if you do provide something satisfactory, they can decide to kill it (maybe because of a dual assignment or because editors changed their minds) and not pay you the full amount, which is unfair.


• Clause 7 They can edit to their usual standards.


• Clause 8 They have absolute rights to how the story will be presented and and to cancel, modify, or delete any story. (Please don't ask me the difference between canceling a story and deleting it.) Paired with clause 6, that means absolute control over whether they have to pay you the full fee or not.


• Clause 9 They want 120 days of exclusive worldwide rights to all media, including electronic. During that period, "PACE is further granted the right to reprint or quote the manuscript without fee or permission for a period of one hundred and twenty (120) days after publication so long as appropriate credit to the writer is given." This wording is sticky, because, strictly speaking, it doesn't give them the right to let another use it. However, this would let them put the same article in another of their magazines, in an edited form if they wished, without paying you anything extra so long as they included your name.


• Clause 10 They state the fee for the piece, you promise that you'll work on "revisions or reasonable additions" during editing and fact checking, even if you've already been paid. You are promised credit (though it would be good to have the option to remove your name should any editing be objectionable). Payment happens through direct deposit.


• Clause 11 You state that you won't get money, gifts, or services from anyone in the article or anyone who appears in preliminary research without approval in advance from Pace, although "Advertising or promotional novelties of nominal value or bonafide business meals are excluded." In other words, are you getting comped lodging, admissions to places, or other such things? The contract probably forbids them.


• Clause 12 You're an independent contractor and responsible for your own insurance, taxes, and benefits.


• Clause 13 Neither you nor Pace can assign responsibilities to someone else. That could be taken to mean that you could not hire someone to do research for you.


• Clause 14 If any part of the contract is waived (and that has to be in writing), the remaining parts are still in force.


• Clauses 15 and 16 Both were missing from the copy I saw (which was retyped by the submitter).


• Clause 17 This is the complete understanding, so anything to the contrary in writing or said doesn't count.


• Clause 18 The laws of North Carolina govern the agreement.