Watch Your Words in Pitches
Also be aware of reader sensitivities. As an example, the phrase "very unique" is unlikely to bring in additional assignments, but for people who count the phrase as silly (there are no degrees of uniqueness), it could be the kiss of death. When the phone doesn't ring, you'll know it's them. No mafia don will ever pay such heed to omerta, the code of silence.
Take a moment before you hit send, run spell check, and then read over the message yourself. Maybe you think you've never had a problem, but you'll never know who was unimpressed and decided to pass.
Labels: language, letter of introduction, marketing, queries



1 Comments:
This is probably my greatest challenge in the freelance world. Why just yesterday I edited a query for a different editor than the one I'd originally intended to pitch and forgot to change the editor's name!
Fortunately, she was forgiving about it. But geesh, I need to slow down.
Thanks for the reminder -- always good to reinforce this one.
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